I was quite tentative about the storyline as I didn’t think that it would appeal to our target audience. As I said in the evaluation, I thought that implementing the comedic side to Apex-Arachnid destroyed the reliability and realism of the super-hero which would’ve affected the audience. I thought that the story line solely focused on attempting to make the audience laugh which by the way, did happen but removed the excitement from other particular scenes like Apex-Arachnid running down the college corridor. Ultimately, I thought that the storyline was a mistake to proceed with as it didn’t quite meet the expectations of a super-hero film, neither did it mean that we successfully accomplished our objective as we were advised to keep dialogue at a minimal level but it’s almost impossible to create humorous moments without dialogue so I thought that was a huge mistake.